NLR Black Ops - Scoots

Phew. Finally done. My first decent piece of work. Drawn with mechanical pencil on paper, colored and shaded in photoshop. Did the pencilwork on sunday night, took me half the week on and off. First time I used photoshop seriously.

Scootaloo as a squad leader (distinguished by the scarf) of the Red Moon black ops. She lost her right eye at the very start of the war and just recently lost her tail.
Rainbow dash is dead thanks to tyrant Celestia and in her memory scoots decorated her eye patch with RD's cutie mark design so nopony would ever forget. Though given the nature of black ops, everypony who stands before her and sees the design will have seconds at best to contemplate on it's meaning.

Sorry about the grimdark backstory (well, mini one anyway). I don't even like grimdark but I had such a blast drawing this.

Comments appreciated since this is my first "proper" drawing. What do you think about the line style?

EDIT: Softer shading, eyelashes, eye improved a lot, brighter backdrop, spelling fixes (last time I'm uploading at 3am).